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and its wawesome and neat i think its perfect and to make you comics better just work hard 
ou really are coming along making manga... A few things though, one, the toning for the material the girl is holding and the grandma's clothes doesn't fit with the rest of the page...it looks very cardborad cutout...
Two, the last panel, the perspective is really good and the background is fantastic (watch the tree shading though, messy...), hovever, the girl's eyes are not proportionate and her foot seems too small...the eyes don't bring enough drama...not enough..."OMG WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!" Feeling, ya know...^^
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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