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June 23, 2008
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:iconkaelngu:
Alot of proportion errors...
Please tell me what i can do to make my comic looks better,and tell me whats wrong in this one too,thank u very much!!

:: Inked traditionally and toned in Photoshop CS3

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:iconandy5281:
ok..this was a nice page..and have the main focus...

but..dun let the the head size same in 1 page..
exp: the 4 head on the top 4 panel..
( u can use it when some reason)

and the trees(the wood part,not the leaf part)..u put too many lines inside..will look messy... ..
*and I found the 2 piece of leaf that I use before..hahaha XD XD XD kidding la~
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~KaelNgu Jun 23, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
thank u very much andy!! got dat,i will be more careful next time;)
and....yeah!! i caught me hahaa....i tried to apply dat leave into this one after looking at ur Oniki pageXDD,coz i found da leave very interesting hahahaa...*run*
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:iconandy5281:
LOL~~~~ yea~ I like that kind of leave~ is interesting XD
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:iconhaziq34200:
It was awesome....but at the last panel, the girl look something wrong but I dunno where..
Sry, Im not that professional..>n<
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~KaelNgu Jun 23, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
thank u, nevermind,i got wat u mean,coz i felt the same too;)
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:iconhaziq34200:
Owh, gambatte!! ^^'
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:iconchrystus:
Look like:iconendling:'s style.. anyway nice job=)
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:iconkaelngu:
~KaelNgu Jun 23, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
wow,eheh but thanks=)
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:iconlittlewaga:
Wow O_O You should really become a mangaka, I'm sure you'd do great! (and I'd buy all your books XD) Nice!
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~KaelNgu Jun 23, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
thank u very much for the support!! really appreciate dat, i will practise more to make my works even greater;)
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